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Monday, Jan 24, 2005
The Observer
- Meghashri Dalvi

Meghashri Dalvi is a well-established science fiction writer in India. Her stories are published in Marathi, as well as in English, and translated in other Indian regional languages. Her short stories have won numerous prizes. She is engineer by profession and enjoys popular science writing, too. Her first book about machines and their history has won her accolades.

“So long, take care.” Mom’s eyes were moist, but her voice was firm. She adjusted the antennas. “Remember, you have to transmit all that you see. And all that you hear.” She smiled. “And baby, all that you think. It is important. You have to think all the time. Think hard. Understand the planet, its weather, and its inhabitants. Then send us your findings. OK?”

I nodded. I was too distressed to speak. I was going to be alone, on a planet so distinct from my home planet, and that looked so unfriendly. And Mom wanted me to think and study!

Why can’t I keep going around with Mom? On fascinating trips to the far galaxies? Why was I sentenced to this lone observer’s job? Why not get someone else to do this while I keep myself close to my Mom.

But I did not ask these questions. Because I knew the answers. There were only a handful of qualified ones like me. With the right combination of genes that guaranteed long life. I had to do this. However difficult it may be – I had to do this. I knew it, and Mom knew it.

She checked her space cruiser and got in. From inside she waved. I was in no mood to wave back as I watched silently.

The cruiser took off. The ground shook with a little thud. I had trouble keeping myself erect on the soft soil. I looked around. There were some small shrubs, and a few flowers on them. The flowers were beautiful and much more colourful than my home planet. The thought of home again brought tears to my eyes, but in this form I had no chance to let them roll.

A small bird came chirruping sweetly. He glanced at me and fluttered his wings with fear. In a moment he was gone.

Time passed. Not much happened around me. I had my antennas tuned perfectly, and I transmitted continuously. My observations, and my thoughts.

Some more days passed. I started liking the water and the taste minerals lent to it. The weather was good, though the Sun was scorching around noontime.

Generally it was quite. Some birds came, looked at me, and hurriedly flew away. Some small animals came by. They hardly noticed me. I knew my odd smell kept them away from me. Mom had said so.

Her memories were still strong. I could almost see the tough woman standing beside me. I could hear her thundering laugh when she had first seen me in this form. And I could feel her warm breath when she had hugged me last.

More time passed. I got accustomed to the planet. Its light, its weather, its birds, and its animals. I started liking the beautiful flowers and the wonderful butterflies. The bright-coloured insects kept me company. The small animals did not bother me, though occasionally the larger animals tried to sniff at me.

Then one day one odd animal came by. It was not very tall, but stood erect on two hind legs. Its erect stance had immense pride. It held a number of shiny things in its front legs.

This creature looked around. I was bit scared by its sharp glances at me. It did notice me, but quickly looked away. Then it started using the shiny things to whack the bushes around me. It cut the tree branches, the bushes, it even tore some flowers. The little insects and birds had already disappeared. The surroundings were quite except for this queer animal’s baffling doings.

The animal collected the cuttings and left. I had not seen such a disastrous thing before. I mean I had seen large animals eating small animals, birds eating insects, and some tiny creatures eating tree leaves. But I had yet to see anyone cutting others and not eating. What possible use this being had for the massacre it did?

I dutifully transmitted my findings.

For the first time, my Mom replied. I really don’t know where in the vast Universe she was; her voice was fading away all the time.

“Son, keep an eye on this creature. It seems to be very destructive. We have not seen any animal standing upright like it does. And yes, being so violent like it is. Keep us regularly updated.”

I shrugged. I was merely doing my duty as an Observer. I would keep on transmitting.

The bad animal returned regularly to my patch. It now brought more of its kind along with. They cleared some ground by burning the grass. I had seen fire before, but not seen anyone making it purposefully. I informed this to my planet. Once again my Mom was distressed.

“This animal is the one we have to watch out for,” she said. “It will ruin the planet before we know!”

I started looking more seriously. I was afraid of this animal, but at the same time in awe with it. To me, it seemed to be getting more powerful day-by-day. It did not grow in size, but it certainly grew in intelligence. I could see it overcoming the difficulties with pleasure and in fact conquering the nature with force.

I was growing up as time passed. I could see the landscape changing slowly. The grass being less abundant. The animals more aggressive. And the air turning foul.

The strange erect animal and its likes kept coming. Again and again. Strangely it did not touch me. It saw me, it saw my growing size and my sheer height, but did not attack me at all.

So here I am. Still transmitting. And waiting for my planeteers to come along. Watching this planet and the strange bad animals. They come and hug me these days. They poke me once in a while, do some testing and calculations, and in the end they simply marvel at me. I don’t understand anything they say, but they call me repeatedly by one name, and I can easily recollect it.

They call me General Sherman, the oldest living Redwood Tree on Earth.

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