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This Wall Near The Sea...

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Raj Shekar comments :
Hi Ambika
in echoing empathy and a difference..in metaphor....

I have
between me
and outside...
a wall of scars
hardened by experience
to protect
to secure against
further erosion
that.....which remains

It keeps out
The challengers
in tests of potency
and the takers too....for joust or jest....
for my fort
protects me too well...it seems
my bastion
and sometimes....a prison
condemming innocents
to an isolatory sentence....mostly self -imposed

a sentence
of longings..unfullfilled
and the lonelier waits
for release
as the space between
yawns and grows
like ancient ivy...
in overunning, sprawling fecundity
feeding on the the remenants
of what...I was...
who I was...

I beg the gods
to shatter
my walls within
through divine interdict-ion
to let my spirit
fly free
as it did once
and meld into
the uncontained
passion
of a lovers arms
and not the vicelike grip
of onerous death

for His time with me is certain.....
He is
my ultimate companian....
like all
I to
am betrothed to him
a union of steps out
of this
here and now.....

How I crave..in this..for elemental flight.....
in sea
in air
and....land

for an homecoming
not with
deaths stillness as escort..
but alive..with Life and 'knowledge'
oozing....in every pore...
    

Sibi Sukumar comments :
Why to erode the wall..
when the waves fail,
after a great trial of strength..
forced to give up?
    


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